Williamarch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vortex]

For a first song, this isn't too bad. What's up with that sample? It's so high pitched and unpleasant. The beat doesn't feel punchy enough. I like the melody though, except it doesn't seem to be able to choose a direction. Hope you can only get better than this! Nice start!

Thanks, and have fun!

Joshymoe responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I will take your notes and use them. Thank you for honestly giving me feedback. I think your notes will be helpful! :) :)

[We Shake Doin' It!]

The melody is really strange, the notes aren't of the same key, and the samples seem random, the vocals don't add much. So many strange moments in the song, it seems like an amalgamate of other songs coupled with the same beat. Also, this is not House. Seems more like HipHop.

SamZM4987 responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I agree, this was not my favorite of my songs I made and I thought the song was Electronic-HipHop, but that wasn't an option. In the future I will try to do better with my music. -SamZM4987

[Rock party]

First of all, I'm pretty sure this is not ambient.
Second, it feels pretty loopy, since it always uses the same effects. It makes it so it doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. It lacks drop, so parts that would sound good after a drop sound just droning and repetitive. Also, what's with high pitched thingy? It just doesn't sound good the way you use it, and it's way too loud and repetitive.

Jonask85 responds:

First of all, it isn't a loop, listen and every part is different, second of all, the high pitched part is amazing, third of all, the parts after the drop are supposed to be repetitive, DUH

[MoCreatureGuy - Palisade]

From the bad MIDI piano to the shitty synths to the lack of any musical sense, this is bad. Straight up awful.

MoCreatureGuy responds:

Any suggestions for improving in the future?

[Nexo - KawaiiHouse (Original Mix)]

Jesus Christ, the start almost made me think it would be Darude - Sandstorm.

This song has a severe lack of bass. I want bass.
Structure is a bit weird, but it's alright.
Track in general lacks juice, to be honest. Doesn't make me wanna dance.
Melody is pretty nice though. I'm sure you can do better next time!

Thanks, and have fun!

NexoMusic responds:

i think i use too much sidechain, lol!

[Nyctophilia ~ Futurised]

The song lacks the juice you find in most Future Bass tracks. The intro sounds really un-intro-like, and there's this combination of sounds that just doesn't go well together. This ain't too bad, though. I'm sure you'll be able to do better as you learn more about music production (watch some tutorials, brah).

Thanks. and have fun!

Nyctophilia responds:

Don't worry I know I'm terrible no need to put it lightly XD I will watch some, thanks for the advice!

[The Obvious Single (feat Phigmeant)]

I appreciate this. Lyrics are pretty good, the beat feels a bit too repetitive. It also lacks a little special that I find in the HipHop I listen too... Well, it's something, but not something I'd listen.
But I'm sure some people will enjoy your stuff, so I'm scouting you for that.

Thanks, and have fun!

KNOInc responds:

Wow, hell yeah! Thanks man, I really appreciate it

[Identity]

Nice! Very nice! I'm definitely scouting this lad! i really don't know what to add! I mean, I don't make music this good! Have a good un!

Solize responds:

Aw geez, thanks! :)