The chopping and the drums are really good! I think the 808 should be a bit louder, and the low passes are a bit abrupt for my taste, but this is a seriously great track! Keep up the good work!
The chopping and the drums are really good! I think the 808 should be a bit louder, and the low passes are a bit abrupt for my taste, but this is a seriously great track! Keep up the good work!
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Beat is pretty good! Melody and bass work really well, but I wish the drums were a bit louder. Lyrics are really interesting, kind of sounds like horrorcore. Nice track, keep it up!
Holy crap man! This is awesome! Love the glitchiness, how every part transitions to the other so smoothly, and it lasts so long without feeling repetitive! My only complaint is that it feels too dry, but that's just nitpicking. Good job!
Is this the O'Jays "Cry together"? I know that sample! I think you could've used it a little more creatively, maybe some more chopping, or speeding it up a little bit. Sometimes, I feel like there's two songs clashing together (0:55). Thanks, and have fun!
Lofi isn't really my thing, but this is pretty good! I love the hi-hat and tape stop usage, and the chords remind me of a song that I don't remember, and I find it so mystifying. Maybe chop it up a bit next time, but that's really just what I would've done. Keep on working those great beats!
Thank you It was very pleasant to read :3 Try to chop, it will be very nice to listen to this :)
Drums are really nice. The structure is a bit weird in my opinion, and the lyrics don't have as much direction, the cooperation doesn't feel very present.
Production is really good! The chorus is a bit repetitive, but those verses are fire!
I can't say I'm a fan of the lyrics, the chorus is a bit dragged out in my opinion. The beat Sounds alright, but the percussion is muddled, I can't really hear the drums properly (the 808 is barely audible). I think this song is alright, but it could've used some more polishing.
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