Williamarch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[New Generation]

Aw geez, this doesn't sound good. Why does the melody change key so often? Is there really only one instrument and a beat? That's very empty. I know you can do better, since this is just the beginning. You'll get better soon enough, watch some tutorials, listen to some music.

Thanks, and have fun!

[Upside-Down Jelly Jar]

Well, it's alright, but it sounds soulless and very MIDI-heavy. The sound choices aren't the best either. Look at some tutorials and practice, you'll see the difference soon enough.

Thanks, and have fun!

[Rock party]

First of all, I'm pretty sure this is not ambient.
Second, it feels pretty loopy, since it always uses the same effects. It makes it so it doesn't feel like it's going anywhere. It lacks drop, so parts that would sound good after a drop sound just droning and repetitive. Also, what's with high pitched thingy? It just doesn't sound good the way you use it, and it's way too loud and repetitive.

Jonask85 responds:

First of all, it isn't a loop, listen and every part is different, second of all, the high pitched part is amazing, third of all, the parts after the drop are supposed to be repetitive, DUH

[The Great Heist of Glasshouse Station]

Hey, hey! This is much better! Glad that scout was worth it! Keep it up, man!

[Stringfingers]

Very good! I just wish it had a little something... special. It feels somewhat empty. But you can be quite the resource for people who would like to use your work in certain creations. I'm scouting you, buddy.

[SoundWaVe]

The structure is a bit incomprehensible, but elements of a good song can be found. I might scout you if I find out you're making better songs now.

[Reminders to Keep in Mind]

Sounds like a normal rock song with way too much delay. I don't know what drugs you have to take to enjoy this.

[MoCreatureGuy - Palisade]

From the bad MIDI piano to the shitty synths to the lack of any musical sense, this is bad. Straight up awful.

MoCreatureGuy responds:

Any suggestions for improving in the future?

[Random Dubstep Test]

I just don't understand why you would put this on Newgrounds if it's just a bunch of effects and slices of beats.

[Nexo - KawaiiHouse (Original Mix)]

Jesus Christ, the start almost made me think it would be Darude - Sandstorm.

This song has a severe lack of bass. I want bass.
Structure is a bit weird, but it's alright.
Track in general lacks juice, to be honest. Doesn't make me wanna dance.
Melody is pretty nice though. I'm sure you can do better next time!

Thanks, and have fun!

NexoMusic responds:

i think i use too much sidechain, lol!